lol at the text. Ok, for a first, it isnt that bad, the pointy squigly things on the sides are nice, but the text doesnt fit in at all, mainly because of the color and dropshadow, the bottom left font dosnt look too good either :-/. Looks like you could have added more of the weird pointy things. But without looking at the font and stuff its nice for a first go, gj.
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[23:18] J: OH MY GOD DUDE
[23:18] J: you're a fucking tool
[23:18] J: open the fucking drawer
[23:18] J: and right there
[23:18] J: next to the goddamn hammer
[23:18] J: is you
[23:18] J: you fucking tool