First large piece

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09-29-2005, 09:18 PM

First large piece

first large piece. 100% photoshop, cept the hand.

comments would be nice.

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09-29-2005, 09:51 PM

whats with the upper right on the white border?

Your trying to balance the composition with the white bars. Although i dont really think they work becuase it draws your attention away from the actualy piece.

I like the circle things, i want to see more of them. The brushing, meh... too ordinary

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09-29-2005, 10:21 PM

Below the wrist/brushing, there is a big black, open space. Whats it for?

Try to get the wrist to blend into the brushing a little bit more gradually.

As Sicloan said, the border...
And take it out of the center!

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09-29-2005, 10:35 PM

as muzik would say
"wabbya teeh eff "
I dont really like the hand part, but it looks good.

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09-29-2005, 10:59 PM

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Originally Posted by kno`

you and your center problems kno

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09-29-2005, 11:37 PM

lol it's a photographer thing

"rule of thirds"
photos "can't" be interesting unless somethings not centered

my photo teacher was fucking crazy bout that

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09-30-2005, 05:37 AM

the border thing was intentional.

thanks for the comments people, i'll keep it in mind.

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09-30-2005, 10:43 PM

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Originally Posted by tune

the border thing was intentional.

thanks for the comments people, i'll keep it in mind.

Maybe if you did the same job to the border on the left, but on the bottom portion. It would help to balance it a bit more...

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