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Old 05-21-2006, 02:01 AM

Deep Thoughts

Just a piece I was working on yesterday...

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Old 05-21-2006, 08:16 AM

Re: Deep Thoughts

there's definately something you could do to it, but im not quite sure what. Maybe fill in some of that negative space at the bottom with some background low opacity shit.
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Old 05-21-2006, 09:55 AM

Re: Deep Thoughts

I'll try a gradient.. Or maybe a blurred fractal

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with fractal

with gradient

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Old 05-21-2006, 10:38 AM

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i love parts of it...like...a lot. but i think that the tech is a little oversized. if you could find a way to scale it down i think i'd personally like it a lot more. but thas just me.
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Old 05-21-2006, 11:07 AM

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Yeah i think the tech on the left is way to overpowering, it needs to be darker and not so much of the focus. Your brightest part should be the focal point (or darkest, but in this case lightest). The tech is sort of distracting at this point.
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Old 05-21-2006, 02:05 PM

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If anything I like this the best, just because it pulls my eyes towards the right parts, instead of just the tech. I pretty much agree with everybody above me about the tech being too distracting (color-wise), and averting your eyes away from the right, which is the best part.
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Old 05-21-2006, 02:10 PM

Re: Deep Thoughts

Looks like shit. Fuck all of you.
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Old 05-21-2006, 02:18 PM

Re: Deep Thoughts

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Old 05-21-2006, 02:36 PM

Re: Deep Thoughts

update...?
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Old 05-21-2006, 10:40 PM

Re: Deep Thoughts

I like it better. :\
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Old 06-01-2006, 11:30 PM

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Looks like shit. Fuck all of you.
Seis all I see you do is post this kinda shit, I have yet to see you give C&C. Keep it up from here on I'm deleting your posts unless they can give some fucking meaning what so ever.

Go lawn mower your wrist or something.
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Old 06-01-2006, 11:49 PM

Re: Deep Thoughts

Too much shit on the screen, tone down a lot of it, and take out the render. Oh then take out the tech stuff, and the brushing. And the background too. And the text.
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Old 06-02-2006, 10:25 AM

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Seis all I see you do is post this kinda shit, I have yet to see you give C&C. Keep it up from here on I'm deleting your posts unless they can give some fucking meaning what so ever.

Go lawn mower your wrist or something.
he gives C&C .... sometimes
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