yea im going to hell, o well.

02-16-2007, 06:28 PM

yea im going to hell, o well.

critique please?

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02-17-2007, 07:53 AM

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take out the rainbow. it looks so smexy.

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02-17-2007, 11:19 AM

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everyone has told me to take out the rainbow, but I like it so everyone can go to hell.

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02-17-2007, 02:46 PM

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i was just listening to john mayer =O

maybe if you just made the rainbow a bit more transparent? otherwise yah, i think it looks really nice.

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02-17-2007, 03:31 PM

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no. take the rainbow out. it's cool kind of, but it doesn't fit with the piece.

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02-17-2007, 04:31 PM

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godamit, why doesn't anyone like the rainbow

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02-17-2007, 04:31 PM

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would changing the colors and making it a little more transparent help?

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02-17-2007, 04:53 PM

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change the colors to fit the scheme(shades of purp) and do the warp thing to the edges if you really like it that much.

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02-17-2007, 10:29 PM

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where the rainbow begins near the bridge of his nose... don't make it rounded off at the end, make it straight and following the same angle as his nose (i know his nose is rounded, but it starts at a fairly straight angle).
make "john mayer" flow better with the bg.
the shit that is repeated from the neck, over his guitar where it is plugged in should follow the same displacement pattern as his shirt. just make sure that the methods for displacing his shirt/guitar are not the same as anything in the bg because it will then look like forground=background, and it doesn't appear that you want that.
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it actually pretty much rawks. nice stuff holmes.

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02-18-2007, 10:05 AM

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ill fix the rainbow, and the repeated things, they copied from the wrong place from the begging. o well. how would I make the "john mayer" fit better?

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02-21-2007, 01:01 AM

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the rainbow should at least blend a bit more but dont take it out. The text John Mayer pisses me off a bit because its so detracting from the main points you probably want people to look @ first and foremost. Regardless its smexy

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02-22-2007, 02:34 PM

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thanks all, one day im just going to redo some things on a lot of my pieces.

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