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10-10-2008, 09:25 PM

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10-10-2008, 09:39 PM

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Kinda hard to like, comprehend.

But it still looks cool regardless.

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10-10-2008, 10:50 PM

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yea, i agree. thanks. i need to finish some others i am working on

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10-11-2008, 01:53 AM

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font is pretty pretty awful

above that is good.. right side kinda has none of the goodness of the left

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10-11-2008, 02:08 AM

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the font is fine, placement could be better though.

Its a nice piece luz, gj.

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10-11-2008, 07:42 AM

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thanks for the comments peeps. yea I need to blend the text a bit more. and it is supposed to be spelled "young burrd" but mr green confused me

well the deal with the right being so blank, is that it is supposed to be a wallpaper (bg) for a small website blog/myspace music kind of deal. and all those boxes would be going in the topish right side.

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10-11-2008, 07:43 AM

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oh and psd that i am using for a wp totally kicks ass (without the text, and bigger)

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10-11-2008, 09:35 AM

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Those are ducks, right?

A lot needs work, but some of it looks pretty cool.

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10-11-2008, 12:20 PM

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i actually think this is really, really cool. get the font out of there and i'd probably even use it as a desktop.

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11-21-2008, 09:52 PM

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The birds could use work and the font should be removed. A picture says a thousand words and this picture definitely says the two words on the bottom

I'm not sure what I can't tell you about the line work. I like the messiness, but it is hard to recognize that they are chicks. Define different features?

In general, I love it. The background looks awesome and it complements the foreground.

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11-24-2008, 02:59 PM

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thanks fulou! yea the only reason I made this (with the font, too) was for a friend that was starting a solo "career" as a rapper, so I was just trying to help him out with a few designs.

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01-02-2009, 11:55 AM

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This is my favorite out of all the stuff you have in the front page of the showcase. It's very stylized and more "you." It doesn't look as traced, even if you did trace the birds. I think the text should go, and spend a little more time on the birds and this will look great.

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01-02-2009, 07:16 PM

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thank you. I really do not like this all that much, allthough i thought it was pleasant for a short time.

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