My first attemmt...

03-02-2005, 08:00 PM

My first attemmt...

This is my first attempt a a semi-complicated sig. I'd like to know what you all think and some things I can do to improve it.

P.S. ~ Hope this in in the right section.

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Samoan

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03-02-2005, 08:05 PM

Should be in the 2d Showcase section....
i'd add some more color for starters.

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03-02-2005, 08:11 PM

showcase is right

Hmm, very interesting sig there. the text blows, not very legible, and doesnt blend well.

As for hte background, looks okay, but the thing is i dont like the grey smudges. the top one looks better, but its not that appealing. Looks almost like camo.

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03-02-2005, 09:11 PM

you know, i like the texture created in the first one, but i do think it would be better if it was blended into something more than just a gray bg.
the text is a little hard to read, also.
but definitely nice first try man!

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03-02-2005, 10:41 PM

Really nice first try, but try to incorperate some color into it. Maybe if you add a character, background, something in there, it might make it look better.

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