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Old 12-14-2006, 01:14 PM

Hey everyone, what do you think?

Hey everybody, I'm new so I thought I'd start by sharing some of my work .

I'm not a big signature artist, and it probably sucks compared to your work but I want to know what you think of these, 2 of my recent work:




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Old 12-14-2006, 04:23 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

scanlines rarely look good. you should get rid of those, or lighten them up, especially on the parts around the people. also, the text is too blurry, and when using a pixel font, it should be sharper. that said, the backround brushing, lighting and the blending is all really well done.
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Old 12-14-2006, 05:59 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

font isn't that great
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Old 12-14-2006, 07:37 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

ur font isnt very nice. too many renders in the first one lol. erase some scanlines. they only look good on SOME artworks/sigs. but good job. the second one i prefer.
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Old 12-15-2006, 11:33 AM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

Thanks all. It's great to get some feedback . I can't believe that I forgot about the text, It was a last minute thing just to get my name on . I'll take your comments into account and make another

Also just another quick question, when is the best time to use scanlines? I just whack em on without really thinking
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Old 12-15-2006, 12:11 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

Hey, welcome to the forum!

Scanlines... well really you only want to use them if your trying to achieve a certain effect, like a CRT monitor effect on an image. There might be other uses but this is the main one I see.
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Old 12-15-2006, 01:35 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

Font is meh.

Second one is the better.

Using other peoples art in your signatures is for the lose.

For everything else there is Visa Mastercard!

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Old 12-16-2006, 04:36 AM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

Ok, thanks all.
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Old 12-29-2006, 02:37 AM

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Font is meh.

Second one is the better.

Using other peoples art in your signatures is for the lose.

For everything else there is Visa Mastercard!

And I do welcome you to the forums, please stay and you shall learn a lot.*
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that is promotional art. the video animator working at the game studio that created those images wanted them to be seen. essentially it's an ad. the guy should be getting paid for spreading those images over the internet. quit the holier than thou act.


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Old 12-30-2006, 06:49 AM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

se vant.... all vicky was saying was that artwork you make all by urself is a lot more creative and preferrably... bettter. i agree
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Old 12-30-2006, 01:05 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

no, he was suggesting it was stealing.
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Old 12-30-2006, 08:39 PM

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oooo ok. i notice now. kay i getcha lol
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Old 12-31-2006, 03:06 AM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

why the hell are you two calling him vicky?
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Old 12-31-2006, 07:54 AM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

i didnt. Se Vant did. it's Vick right?
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Old 12-31-2006, 12:25 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

I think that for now I'll stick with using other peoples renders, they look hard to do, I can cut them from other pictures but that's about it.

What do you guys think to animated sigs? I was going to post this sooner but errr...let's just say it's early for next christmas



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Old 12-31-2006, 12:26 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

Also there's scan lines on that one too, made it before the other 2, try to forget about them .
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Old 12-31-2006, 01:10 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

Very nice animation, snow looks great, but perhaps make it fall a bit slower, so it looks more "gentle" and realistic.
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Old 12-31-2006, 01:15 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

Yeah, it actually looks nice. And you showed you weren't even that much of a newb by adding different size brush spots to create a sense of depth.

But I think following MonkeyRonin's advice wouldn't hurt.
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Old 12-31-2006, 03:53 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

It's still a step up from your last sigs, and like muzikaddict said, I like how you added depth to the snow. Good job.
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Old 12-31-2006, 06:13 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

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Old 01-01-2007, 02:23 PM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

Thank you all very much, I didn't really like that one much but it seems you guys think it's ok .
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Old 01-01-2007, 02:50 PM

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I don't like the colors in the first or second much. good blending, but the color scheme is choppy, like you picked the right ones but the highlights are turned up. maybe more effects?(not scan lines.)
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Old 01-02-2007, 02:50 AM

Re: Hey everyone, what do you think?

Too bright maybe?
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