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Old 03-21-2007, 08:48 PM

a poem
insurance
flies buzz in and out of my open window
a cool breeze kisses my soft lips
hardens my nipples
and raises the hair on my neck
"desire," I repeat
Desire.
- a poem, by Andrew Ferrer



heavily influenced by Leonard Cohen and X-ACTO knives SPLITTING MY NIPPLES OPEN.
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Old 03-21-2007, 09:59 PM

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I wrote a sonnet for English class today entitled, "Why I hate Anglish Class: An Sonnet"










I was able to get away with calling my teacher an idiot, for art's sake!
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Old 03-21-2007, 10:04 PM

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bit, how long is "closure" off of damnation?
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Old 03-21-2007, 10:29 PM

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everybody get Zach Galifianakis' "Live At The Purple Onion". here's me listening to it:





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Old 03-22-2007, 07:17 PM

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By the way you need to get his dvd, its one of the greatest things ever.

I DON'T WIKE HAVING A BEWD, IT HOATS.
MY BEWD HOATS.

Five year old who complains about having a beard is pure genius.
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Old 03-22-2007, 07:27 PM

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Zomg

By the way you need to get his dvd, its one of the greatest things ever.

I DON'T WIKE HAVING A BEWD, IT HOATS.
MY BEWD HOATS.

Five year old who complains about having a beard is pure genius.
live at the purple onion? that's what I got.

that show the amazing race, is is about white people?
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Old 03-22-2007, 09:00 PM

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bit, how long is "closure" off of damnation?
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Old 03-22-2007, 09:05 PM

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and it ends abruptly right? cause if that kept going i would die to hear more
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Old 03-22-2007, 09:29 PM

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I was able to get away with calling my teacher an idiot, for art's sake!
In Blankets, Craig gets an F on his creative writing assignment for writing an 8-page poem about people eating their own poop.
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Old 03-22-2007, 09:34 PM

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I wish I could write eight pages.
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Old 03-23-2007, 12:26 AM

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It's pretty much abrupt, but the next song continues the sound almost, in a type of Pink Floyd-esque way, where it still just sounds right.


So yeah, it does end in that way, but it's not like it's bad at all.


Oh, and for the record, I've pretty much gotten out of my Opeth and metal phase entirely (besides the band maudlin of the Well, but only because they're the best unknown band ever), and moved onto Elliott Smith and other indie shiz.




Too bad, so sad.
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Old 03-23-2007, 03:56 PM

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live at the purple onion? that's what I got.

that show the amazing race, is is about white people?
The DvD is too good for the world.
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